For my opportunity, I chose to focus on book sales to students who are getting shortchanged by large markups. I chose to use this opportunity to create a business, Booklist, to help students connect to others in need of a similar book.
This is a very interesting to focus on. It is much larger scale than I have seen and I think it is a huge problem that definitely needs to be addressed. You had a very clear speaking voice in your pitch and you articulated your idea nicely. Perhaps work on the lighting a little bit and don't be afraid to move around a little more. Like I said I think this is a great idea and I can't wait to see how you develop it over the remainder of the course.
This is a very interesting to focus on. It is much larger scale than I have seen and I think it is a huge problem that definitely needs to be addressed. You had a very clear speaking voice in your pitch and you articulated your idea nicely. Perhaps work on the lighting a little bit and don't be afraid to move around a little more. Like I said I think this is a great idea and I can't wait to see how you develop it over the remainder of the course.
ReplyDeleteHey Alan, I think you did a good job on your pitch. My only suggestion would be to introduce your concept a little earlier on in the pitch
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